Adding Commas to a Paragraph

Adding Commas to a Paragraph This activity offers practice in applying the principles for utilizing commas successfully. Before endeavoring the activity, you may think that its accommodating to survey this article on comma use. In the accompanying section, embed commas any place you think they have a place. (Have a go at perusing the section so anyone might hear: in any event at times, you ought to have the option to hear where commas are required.) When you are done, contrast your work and the accurately punctuated form of the passage on page two. The Least Successful Car In 1957 Ford delivered the vehicle of the decadethe Edsel. Half of the models offered end up being astoundingly inadequate. In the event that fortunate the pleased proprietor of an Edsel could appreciate any or the entirety of the accompanying highlights: entryways that wouldnt close hoods and trunks that wouldnt open batteries that went dead horns that stuck hubcaps that dropped off paint that stripped transmissions that seized up brakes that fizzled and press fastens that couldnt be pushed even with three individuals attempting. In a stroke of showcasing virtuoso the Edsel one of the biggest and most extravagant vehicles at any point manufactured harmonized with the rising open enthusiasm for economy vehicles. As Time magazine announced It was an exemplary instance of an inappropriate vehicle for an inappropriate market at an inappropriate time. Never well known in the first place the Edsel immediately turned into a national joke. One business author at the time compared the vehicl es deals chart to an incredibly hazardous ski incline. He included that so far as he knew there was just one instance of an Edsel ever being taken. At the point when you are done, contrast your work and the effectively punctuated rendition of the passage underneath The Least Successful Car (Passage With Commas Restored) In 1957[,] Ford delivered the vehicle of the decadethe Edsel. Half of the models offered end up being staggeringly inadequate. In the event that lucky[,]â the glad proprietor of an Edsel could appreciate any or the entirety of the accompanying highlights: entryways that wouldnt close[,]â hoods and trunks that wouldnt open[,]â batteries that went dead[,]â horns that stuck[,]â hubcaps that dropped off[,]â paint that peeled[,]â transmissions that seized up[,]â brakes that failed[,]â and press fastens that couldnt be pushed even with three individuals attempting. In a stroke of advertising genius[,]â the Edsel[,]â one of the biggest and most extravagant vehicles ever built[,]â coincided with the rising open enthusiasm for economy vehicles. As Time magazine reported[,] It was a great instance of an inappropriate vehicle for an inappropriate market at an inappropriate time. Never well known to start with[,]â the Edsel immediately turned into a national joke. One busine ss author at the time compared the vehicles deals chart to an incredibly risky ski slant. He included that so far as he knew there was just one instance of an Edsel ever being taken.